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SIENDONIA
SIENDONIALv42yrSIENDONIA

I have a suggestion for the author of this book. 1) Please fix the paragraphs that are sometimes indented too deep (maybe it's because you're using the 'tab' key) 2. For conversation, please make them interact more.. Clear? If there are too many conversations without an explanation of how they interact, they will just look like people standing and talking to each other. That's all OwO Semangat puasanya bang

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They are indeed just talking while standing Ya, makasih wkwkwk

SIENDONIA
SIENDONIALv4SIENDONIA

Ah.. Isee Oke, wkwk

SenorSleep:They are indeed just talking while standing Ya, makasih wkwkwk