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Review Detail of _Pochitalover_ in A story of multiverse travels.

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_Pochitalover_
_Pochitalover_Lv22yr_Pochitalover_

So far, it's an entertaining story with the potential to be the best if you play well with the world, its ecosystem, and the characters. I feel like the system is a bit confusing when it comes to skill levels, but it's nothing to write home about. Hephaestus as a love interest will never be bad or negative for a danmachi story, if it's a harem out of obligation, Haruhime should be there, with some whipping and slapping here and there, Freya, Mikoto wouldn't be bad either, the pacing of the story though it's quick, it doesn't destroy your mind to the point where you can't keep up and my only real complaint is that every woman the protagonist has ever met has sexual desires for him or craves his D which isn't very good because early or early it can be a mini kirito or some aberration of his style, I'm more of those who like a quick romance, but not at the speed of light, it's also not very nice to make random women fall in love at first sight with the protagonist just to that I stay as the man with the biggest D in the place, I support the author in this successful start and I reserve the 5 stars for the future.

A story of multiverse travels.

MunirSM

4の人に「いいね!」しました

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MunirSM
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Thanks for the feedback. It is appreciated.

GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3GawkGawk

Hephaestus is the only good character you mentioned