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the start screams beginner writer so you should fix that and also I recommend talking about a topic for longer than: 1chpt back in time 2chpt meeting...... 3chpt attending..... 4chpt reaching ....... 5chpt meeting betrayer 6chpt revenge 7chpt going back
Eyes Of Eternity
Pantovicc
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Pantovicc:I really appreciate this. I'll try updating first chapter, as I personally don't like it at all neither. Thank you, look forward to updates, I'll use your advice <3
Ideas about a new book if you drop this one someday or if you just want to make a new book to spend some time on sth new or to gain inspiration heart of eternity my road to becoming immortal reaching the top eyes of !?!?!?!?!?!? in my book eyes of eternity eyes of eternity rewrite
Pantovicc:I really appreciate this. I'll try updating first chapter, as I personally don't like it at all neither. Thank you, look forward to updates, I'll use your advice <3
I really don't think I'll be dropping this one. But I do have some new novels in plan after this. One is going to be entirely romance, and the other one will be action and super powers again
GeniusIthink:Ideas about a new book if you drop this one someday or if you just want to make a new book to spend some time on sth new or to gain inspiration heart of eternity my road to becoming immortal reaching the top eyes of !?!?!?!?!?!? in my book eyes of eternity eyes of eternity rewrite
Just a quick note, latest chapter is now updated chapter 1. Please, let me know what do you think. I think it's way better now, both writing, grammar and story over all. Thank you for all the help and support!
GeniusIthink:Ideas about a new book if you drop this one someday or if you just want to make a new book to spend some time on sth new or to gain inspiration heart of eternity my road to becoming immortal reaching the top eyes of !?!?!?!?!?!? in my book eyes of eternity eyes of eternity rewrite
since its not my type of novel I have only read 1 chpt the redo is very confusing, if you ask new readers to read it, it makes a few questions Who are they? Why?
Pantovicc:Just a quick note, latest chapter is now updated chapter 1. Please, let me know what do you think. I think it's way better now, both writing, grammar and story over all. Thank you for all the help and support!
Pantovicc:Just a quick note, latest chapter is now updated chapter 1. Please, let me know what do you think. I think it's way better now, both writing, grammar and story over all. Thank you for all the help and support!
Pantovicc:Just a quick note, latest chapter is now updated chapter 1. Please, let me know what do you think. I think it's way better now, both writing, grammar and story over all. Thank you for all the help and support!