Great writing quality and world design is good but lacking more info about world. especially with the various POV referencing things like we should know it. now the bad... the MC is absolutely the worst MC I have read in years. I actually hope he will die and be replaced with a new one. he has no redeeming qualities, moody, weak, timid he is simply a sheeple who follows the herd. for all his desire for something new he is a coward to face it. basically he has the makings of a mob character. so why the he'll is he a MC.
BlackGoblin
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いいねthank you for the review.😁 About information about the world, you'll have to wait a little longer. The MC probably won't survive a group of farmers as of current😅 As for the main character, he is made to be like that. pathetic useless and slightly wimpy. I want him to change gradualy instead of being super awesome from the start. I try to let him be more 'normal' so i hope you continue reading to see him go foward.