The overall story is good. but pure dumb nature of the MC is getting me. He has super OP items but conveniently "Forgets"
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いいね"I invite you to review my story. Your words have made me feel like you can offer my story a positive step forward. I'm currently 72 chapters in, and it's a slow-burn narrative.13 chapters a week. Each Arc consists of about 7-10 chapters and features high climax points, along with a unique Spirit system. However, as a poor writer, I can't afford to have an editor review my work. If you ever find the time to read a new story, I would love to have your eyes on my work. ❤️ Thanks!"