So far, so good :)
Writing style is a bit immature, but great overall. Interesting characters and world build, fleshed out characters, and slight cliffhangers. I’m interested to know what happens next!
Thank you for your support and review 😊 I'm glad that you like the story. I'm going to improve and develop myself and keep updating. Tbh I'm ashamed of my english, this story was translated from my language again🙈😅 but I'm trying my best to make it as well as I intended😊