Nothing except excellent writing, descriptions, and anything else comes to mind. I believe that it well-written and has the power to captivate readers. It felt like reading a scene from a movie because of all the time and location changes, and I find that to be confusing. The first chapter does a fantastic job of establishing the type of story I would anticipate given the summary.
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