Review Detail of LucienNg in Life of the Royalties

The story has potential. It seems like you plan out the plot ahead since the pacing is going well. I like how we as readers get an overview of what the MC’s personality is just from reading the first few lines. There were some small grammar mistakes but worry not, as it did not affect my reading experience at all. A little bit of polishing here and there would definitely helps your novel shine even more. Keep on writing :).