Review Detail of Sheeronicle in The JOKER
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Your plot is good. But make it faster, you can combine two chapter in one chapter. I hope this story is not a cliché story. Hope for the best from author.
The JOKER
bunnyrabbit
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いいねYour plot is good. But make it faster, you can combine two chapter in one chapter. I hope this story is not a cliché story. Hope for the best from author.
bunnyrabbit
1の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね