So I can't say something stroy wise because it is too soon but I like the premise of this Fanfic and the charakter is at least half desent to good. The encounter with his starter was a little bit rushed and in my opinion a pokemon need a true name as well.
Sleepyheadedauthor
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!