What like about this novel is the story and characters. But the writer has a lot to improve in this like the sentence in this novel are not formed properly. There are lot unnecessary words in every sentence, the artist should customize the sentence so that we as readers can understand it properly. And first of all there should be some explanation about cultivation realms and what are they using for there cultivation, Alchemist rank, cultivation technique rank , Martial arts rank, weapon rank, etc. About elements like Fire, water, earth, wood, metal,lighting, wind, yin And yang, light and dark, poison,etc. About demonic beasts grade. And the Talent rank should be from 1 to 4 or higher. Not in the reverse form. Because it confuse the readers. And last but least if you are writing a novel you should update it 3-4 times within a week so that readers can injoy it. Not like some novels where artist take months or years to update their novel. That's what I want to say to artist of this novel , so please take it as a request to artist to consider what I have said.
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