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Rating: 5

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SHiRa155Lv42yrSHiRa155

a very good novel and an interesting plot keep it up bro don't stop and update regularly I am super sure that this novel has a lot of potential keep up the good work

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RTDwinterLv15RTDwinter

I agree great potential. The only thing that is really needed to fix is the few grammar errors. Also don’t need to put conversation into [ ] or ( ) it is slightly confusing when reading Mr. Author!

2yr

SHiRa155Lv4SHiRa155

lol I use " " in my novel it's like this one if you want check out

RTDwinter:I agree great potential. The only thing that is really needed to fix is the few grammar errors. Also don’t need to put conversation into [ ] or ( ) it is slightly confusing when reading Mr. Author!

2yr