very good .... keep writing â€ïžðŒððð ð try to focus on the scenes more and it will be greatâ€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïžððŒðŒðð€£ðððŒðŒðŒðŒðŒðŒðŒðŒðŒððŒðŒ
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