Review Detail of seraphione in No Romance, Please

Oh, man! I am just in love with the female lead! I love how she knows what she wants and uses her resources and knowledge to get it without hesitation. And if she decides that she doesn’t need or want it any longer, she’ll move on. If she doesn’t like something, she won’t keep still. I’ve only read 10 chapters so far, but I am so hooked on this story because of her! I’m so curious about how her relationship with the ML progress from here on out. Because I’ve only read 10 chapters, the world-building is still in progress. But seeing how it’s developing, I think we’ll get more information about this world later on. I noticed the author tends to put a comma after closed sentences with quotation marks. American and British English usually have different general rules for where to place the comma (ex: American English places the comma before the closing quotation mark, while in British English, it goes after). But sentences with quotation marks that end in punctuation mean the end of the sentence. Thus, it usually does not need a comma. Here is an example: Not Correct: “I don’t care about him anymore!”, she said. Correct: “I don’t care about him anymore,” she said. (American English) Correct: “I don’t care about him anymore”, she said. (British English) Correct: She said, “I don’t care about him anymore!” I usually write this way though: "I don't care about him anymore!" She said. There are some grammar errors, but nothing that will impede readers from enjoying the story. Even a novel I’ve written and edited over three years still has many problems. So, if you’re thinking about giving this novel a try, you definitely should! It’s rare to find a strong female lead who gets things done. The male lead seems interesting as well…but since he just recently showed up, my opinion about him is on hold for now. This is a novel I’ll closely follow from here on out, as I look forward to how the story will continue! Please continue writing!