Review Detail of HotPotatoBW in White Online

This novel is good actually based on my standard. Writing quality is 3. The plot is good but author inserts things out of nowhere for author's convenience. There's a lot of times the author did this but I overlook em but there's this on ch 399. Author used the excuse "It was too stressful for his mortal body." Is all the hype sh*t about removing the thing that limits human (Whether he has 'God Illness' is not yet confirmed in this chapter BUT YES HE HAS.) only amount to that? (Remember *Ch 370, It is said that the limiter was made so it will not break the balance of the universe.—do I need to explain what this implies??????) MEANING THEY CAN GROW STRONG ENOUGH TO CREATE TROUBLE GODS/PRIMORDIAL GODS OR... GROW STRONGER THAN EM (MAYBE) (BECAUSE IF THEY CAN'T CAUSE TROUBLE FOR THEM THEN IS THE AUTHOR JUST BLUFFING?) He's already fighting demons that killed the Gods (his future self) yet the author used the excuse "mortal". MAYBE the author nerfed the Gods? Or are the Gods/Primordial Gods weaker than a mere mortal now? (THE FORMER ARE MOST LIKELY THE CASE BECAUSE IN THE FUTURE CH ISAAC BECOMES THE GOD OF DEATH AND LIFE. WHICH MEANS BEING MORTAL IS NOT AN EXCUSE BECAUSE IT IS POSSIBLE TO REACH GODHOOD AND THE LATTER IS JUST ME BEING SARCASTIC LOL.) Oh maybe the limiter is not really that important since they don't seem strong, they're still JUST MERE mortals (weak). This doesn't seem to be the case because it is said that without the limiter it will break the balance of the universe. (AND AGAIN IN THE FUTURE HE BECAME GOD OF DEATH AND LIFE—SO BEING MORTAL IS NOT REALLY THE BEST EXCUSE THE AUTHOR COULD PROPOSE.) Story Development 3/5. It's so-so. The author changed Isaac's legacy near the ending but it's understandable. His legacy: White Death is mediocre compared to other legacy so for him to defeat Demon Gods and Kings he has to have better skills. He becomes OP asf yeah ending rush... Character design 3/5. Why do people make the people around Isaac acts like NPC? Their overprotective nature, obsession, etc. are... illogical to the point that even crazy people won't see it coming lol. so this made me give character design 3/5. (I didn't account the part where author did Bella dirty. She just want to cook bruh why'd u kill her? [img=disgusted] RIP. BELLA, BEST GIRL.) Update stab? idk 5/5. World Background: So-so (3/5), most of em seems force or for author's convenience. (alr gave example in writing quality.)