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Dummaro
DummaroLv32yrDummaro

No plot at all , all caracter including mc feel like one dimensional, like they don't have any feelings and thought process at all, they are there because author need them to tell the story...... No plot devlopement at all.... totally amature writer..... But good luck author for your next work and try to develop the caracter well

My Lewd Symbiote System

Perverted_Fella

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Perverted_Fella作者Perverted_Fella

Lol, I agree with you. This is my first work and it has been written a year ago, that's why it's cringe. if you want to understand my plight, check out my new novel. [Reincarnated with a bad luck system]