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DaoistyQNGiX
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MC is nerfed big time and the fact that he actually trusts Shield is shocking lol so essentially he is an idiot. Also, he tells Fury about his abilities, his limitations, how his abilities work like the how he teleports using the Flying Thunder God Technique by placing a marker before telporting to that location.... Overall this fic was awful. If it was rewritten then yeah it could be good but as it is now there is a 0% chance for it to become good

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AceTheHonoredOne

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I have not even read this "mtl" and everything I wrote is written by myself without any help or copying others so NO! I have not "copy and pasted" from anything!

dewon07:are you copy and pasting from mlt. if you're that novel is aweful. it has self ntr. minato ( mc) form who natasha loves. but mc already summon kushina . after knewing kushina is minato wife . natasha still persue it. mc doesn't have gut to tell the truth. so he summon minato. *boom* self ntr minato accepted both of them. i stop after reading that. also mc goes china security bureau and give them all of his trophies ( alien meterial). so in my opinion that novel is warth of 2 to 2.3 stars . if still anyone want to read you can check on mlt marvel play as naruto at the beginning
AceTheHonoredOne
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Let's just assume that the MC wouldn't tell fury about his limitations. One day Fury says to him, "teleport me to @$#%@" or something like that, how do you think he would explain that he can't? You're unfairly reviewing my Fanfiction as awful before even thinking about the consequences of his actions. Do you think Fury would trust someone that lies to him? No. So by telling him his limitations, the MC makes sure that something like Captain America: Civil War doesn't happen to him.🤦🏻‍♂️

dewon07
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are you copy and pasting from mlt. if you're that novel is aweful. it has self ntr. minato ( mc) form who natasha loves. but mc already summon kushina . after knewing kushina is minato wife . natasha still persue it. mc doesn't have gut to tell the truth. so he summon minato. *boom* self ntr minato accepted both of them. i stop after reading that. also mc goes china security bureau and give them all of his trophies ( alien meterial). so in my opinion that novel is warth of 2 to 2.3 stars . if still anyone want to read you can check on mlt marvel play as naruto at the beginning

AceTheHonoredOne:Let's just assume that the MC wouldn't tell fury about his limitations. One day Fury says to him, "teleport me to @$#%@" or something like that, how do you think he would explain that he can't? You're unfairly reviewing my Fanfiction as awful before even thinking about the consequences of his actions. Do you think Fury would trust someone that lies to him? No. So by telling him his limitations, the MC makes sure that something like Captain America: Civil War doesn't happen to him.🤦🏻‍♂️
GAMING_IS_MUST
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why is the mc nerfed MCU abomination is not strong enough to face Minato Minato reaction speed should easily make him able to teleport before he hits....

AceTheHonoredOne:Let's just assume that the MC wouldn't tell fury about his limitations. One day Fury says to him, "teleport me to @$#%@" or something like that, how do you think he would explain that he can't? You're unfairly reviewing my Fanfiction as awful before even thinking about the consequences of his actions. Do you think Fury would trust someone that lies to him? No. So by telling him his limitations, the MC makes sure that something like Captain America: Civil War doesn't happen to him.🤦🏻‍♂️
RemoteRomance
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Fury never trusts anyone and telling him about your abilties just gives him control over you. Telling him about your abilities is like telling Batman your abilities except instead of him being able to trap or kill you with a contingency plan at any time, the information is also given to hydra.

AceTheHonoredOne:Let's just assume that the MC wouldn't tell fury about his limitations. One day Fury says to him, "teleport me to @$#%@" or something like that, how do you think he would explain that he can't? You're unfairly reviewing my Fanfiction as awful before even thinking about the consequences of his actions. Do you think Fury would trust someone that lies to him? No. So by telling him his limitations, the MC makes sure that something like Captain America: Civil War doesn't happen to him.🤦🏻‍♂️