Review Detail of Lazyboi in I reincarnated in the world of Re: Zero (Animé Multiverse)
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You know, i have mixed feelings about this fic. On one hand you got the plot which in my opinion is quite unique when it comes to fanfiction. On the other hand, you got the dialogues which are confusing at times because you couldn't indentify who or what the character is talking about due to the mix of "I, he, she". But even with all those flaws, i still give you my full support author-san with the hopes that you will one day improved your English and take this fic to the level that it deserved. Also i'll vote for the harem because i don't see any harem tag on this fic.
I reincarnated in the world of Re: Zero (Animé Multiverse)
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Thanks for all the support and of course I try to improve my English in addition to the dialogues in my Fic, since this is the first one that I write, it may have errors but I always try to correct them so that in future fics there are not as many as now and they can enjoy without complications the story that I want to convey to you.
Max_Reven:Thanks for all the support and of course I try to improve my English in addition to the dialogues in my Fic, since this is the first one that I write, it may have errors but I always try to correct them so that in future fics there are not as many as now and they can enjoy without complications the story that I want to convey to you.