A creative story, I was waiting to accumulate more chapters to comment my opinion. Your concept is fresh, I have not seen another person using this character. Your writing makes the story flow normally, the interactions between the characters are natural, without forcing a dialogue. So far, this story is wonderful, keep up the project ðð»~ I need more!
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