Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in ◇Dark Souls◇
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The strong point of this was its complex plot. Accompanied with good character interactions and character design were no cardboard cutouts. Story direction was also one thing that makes the readers on their toes to read. The downside was it has to be handled with an editor. Maybe the quality will be better that way. Anyways, this is still one of the best when it comes to plot out there. Good job!
◇Dark Souls◇
Rya_kishou
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UWU, Don't be sad. I am not English proficient too. I am planning to hire an editor too someday. Also, do enjoy writing [img=recommend]
Rya_kishou:ahh thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the plot T_T I still have to send the first 3 chapters to my Editor for spell/grammar checking, I got him in the boat with the 4th chapter so 😔 👉👈 meaning to say; ik my grammar isn't top notch as english is only my third language but I got help already for it >~<
oh no worries i'm not sad! ik I need to improve so it's fine i'm happy for the constructive criticism uwu ♡ and ganba! you can do it 💕
Mel_Aniv:UWU, Don't be sad. I am not English proficient too. I am planning to hire an editor too someday. Also, do enjoy writing [img=recommend]
Rya_kishou:oh no worries i'm not sad! ik I need to improve so it's fine i'm happy for the constructive criticism uwu ♡ and ganba! you can do it 💕
Also, if you have something to spare, please vote for this Zombie novel of mine. If you have stones, that is....... I am in a WPC contest currently. 😔
Rya_kishou:oh no worries i'm not sad! ik I need to improve so it's fine i'm happy for the constructive criticism uwu ♡ and ganba! you can do it 💕