Review Detail of DaoistnrvBLp in A life's Diary

Yo guys, author here and well, yeah I am shamelessly giving this a 4.8 rating. This is my first novel to be exact so be a little light in the criticism please , also this was inspired by Novel's extra, Mother of learning(god tier) and Demon prince attends the academy. Please don't compare them for I know how amazing they are while imma still a noob. Anyways fun reading then.