Review Detail of ShocKxRocK in The Great Werewolf System

Thank I will make those changes now, and do you think the wait time for the next chapter is to long?

yeah, try like 2 chaps or three a week, you can start of doing minis like 900-100 words or even 899 but you should add more some may snipe the idea even tho uve already written the first chap. Some people may be really good at writing and can make a good cover (find a better one than urs infact) edit it like a pro, an release maybe 10 chaps and I'll look like some copycat outcast