synopsis by itself already ruined the story for me, I got turned off from reading the story just by looking at the synopsis was complete rubbish
any_yn
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いいねDear divine_universe I'm sorry to disappoint you. I am a big fan of the untamed universe (mo dao zu shi).I love thinking about them and writing stories.But this is my first story on the untamed world that's why I made some mistakes.I know the summary is quite boring I will change it very soon I was thinking the same. Thank you very much for your suggestion.this is my first FanFiction i hope you will forgive me please read on. maybe you liked the story And once again I want to apologize to you for disappointing you,