A good novel. I enjoyed reading it a lot. It really contains a huge amount of genres such that if I were to point out each one by one, I would probably write an essay. Surprisingly it feels really comfy without making me feel confused or bored. The grammar and other English stuff are almost perfect or maybe I was a bit too immersed in the novel quite enough to ignore it. The writing style tends to be more similar to Chinese? The humor of the author seems to have a 50-50 chance to be a hit or a miss. Probably you will cringe and laugh every single chapter. Also, there is a sense of fluidity between chapter and environment change, it doesn't feel too "rigid". The story isn't an exact replica of a cliche reincarnation, but it does indeed have some cliche stuff that probably wouldn't bother anyone much. I love how amazingly the genres mixed up with themselves. There is qi, magic, and other stuff but believe me when I say that both cultivation novel fans and the magic reincarnation fans will probably enjoy it a lot. There is an extreme lack of side character plot tho. I really would like to see side stories and more chapters based on characters other than MC, I feel that the author isn't taking proper advantage of the 3rd person's view to give little more insight on others except for the MC. The story is also similar to a XuanHuan novel, MC is indeed getting strong beyond a limit(i bet 300 chapters more and MC will be tearing dimensions and space) and excitingly it does the power increase in a very steady and "non-cringing" way. Till the point where I have read (chap 396), there isn't any romance(except {spoiler}) but please don't think that I feel disappointed about it tho, it would make me feel really weird if a shark has romances with human (even weirder if the human reciprocates). Interestingly coming to recent chapters, I could see something interesting happening between seb and ******, and I say I approve with all my heart! To those who are curious and haven't started reading, I'm not spoiling! read yourselves HeHe. Alright now coming to character development, it's pretty average, to be honest, and actually could ultimately be called the weak point of this novel. None of the characters except MC was given enough spotlight or chapter appearance to create a lasting impression for me. Even the character's personalities are a mystery since there's too little information about them. I hope the Author could do something about this because then it would easily be 5 stars or 4.5+ stars novel for sure. The world background is solidly built as of 390 chapters. The world might be confusing at first but later it became really good. for the information new readers, the world is properly explained in later chapters. so just like the system would say: "You aren't high level enough to access world information, newbie reader!" Okay, that's it! thanks for spending time reading this lengthy review and good job author-san for making an awesome novel!

Hello there, Author here. This is my 3rd book, I decided to start this after getting some confidence in my writing. It's not perfect, the mc is not perfect either, but I'm pretty sure that it's enjoyable. If you give it a try, then thanks in advance. And if there's any problem with the writing, you can just indicate and I'll try to fix it within 24 hours. The book is something like the picture, and yes, there'll be lots of evolutions. Thanks, and read it.

Never before have I realized I wanted a mix between Re:Monster and Subnautica. Evolving shark MC? Ocean Planet? Take five stars, i ****ing love it.

I was hoping for something a bit more mature but this is like a Disney's little mermaid version of a evolution with a system novel. I mean your grammar is great, the story had potential, but it's not something made for adults. I was so into it until the turtle showed up and then it just went downhill for me personally. The teenage part which you know what I mean did it for me.

Personally, alright? It shares common problem with lots of other Webnovel out there (for me). Which is the MC is unpleasant. Rude to the system. Why? Why would you be rude to other people that do you no harm? I can't follow the adventure of some guy(or shark) that I detest.

Mc is too much of a ret*rd(Despite being a supposed to be a genius) for me to continue reading this novel and we also seems to have a sh*tty system who would make things more harder for our supposed genius(Dropped at chap 5)

Chapter 280something. I feel tired, it took 180 chapter for him to get stronger, from 100 to 280, even more, he doesn't evolve like the image could lead you to think. He is a shark, and stay a shark., just a bigger one, no chtulu thing or mixed overpowered thing.

The best thing i have ever read. MC is a VERY NOT stupid individual. The logic is amazing. Loved how MC is immortal and does not die from bleeding.

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