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Kloaken1
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Author, have you dropped this book pls I need to know. Anyway here is my review. l think the writing quality is pretty good and there's only a few grammar issues here and there. The only problem I have is that the writing is quite repetitive like when the author really likes to write about the character's sweat on their necks or on their backs. Story development is very good and there's not much to hate on. Character design is quite good but a big problem is that the author never really explained the limitations of the character's powers and it causes you to only wonder why the character's not doing this or why they are not doing that. Update stability appears to have been good and the author Updateing the story weekly but when the author has disappeared for six months, I can simply not give it a five star rating. The world background is not often talked about but it's a fanfic so the author does not really need to so it's fine.

The value of a hero

Grim_Jester

Liked it!

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