Review Detail of HaughtyYoungMaster in Naruto: The GodLike Hokage + Multiverse

Honestly, I had intended to read this again since the last time I did was around January 2021, and I had stopped reading it for a little while on translatinotaku; I had paused at the point when they gave him the moniker "Konoha's Asura". So I was browsing on Webnovel when I came across this Fanfiction; luckily for me, it was the same Fanfiction that I had read 10 months prior. So, after reading over the description, I discover that the Author is really attempting to 'improve' the syntax of this Godly Fiction. What should I do? I double-check everything! Confident in the fact that this is far more readable than the previous time I read it. HAHA! I'm sorry for making such a rash choice, but after a few chapters, I've come to the conclusion that here is where I'm going to draw the line and call it quits. For this, I would use the phrase "swapping out" rather than "improving." So there you have it, your 'better' misconception as to what has been improved and what has not been improved. I'm not going to give you a low grade since this is not your work and is just a "improved" version. Using The God of Soul System and Hokage: Ryo Path, I attempted to replicate what you have done, my fellow Author; but, I was unable. Believe me when I say that it is far more difficult than it seems and sounds. I'll end by wishing you the best of luck in your writing endeavours and a long and prosperous career in the Department.