Review Detail of AidaHanabi in Dear Me (English Version)

It has been a while since I read  a teen romance novel. Actually, I have read the Indonesian version of this book. In my opinion, for the Indonesian version, you put those words quite nice and fond. As for the English version, there may be some that need to be slightly changed or improved to make it more fluent and beautiful. And pay attention to the use of pronouns (she/he, her/him, her/his.) Some paragraphs/sentences confuse me because of that case. But so far, quite interesting.