Review Detail of francis_daigle in The Tail Of Twins

Item: The Tail Of Twins
Rating: 4.4

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francis_daigleLv142yrfrancis_daigle

Hello, I just want to tell the writer that is story is a mess. You need to add more detail of Who talk or whos POV. The story is on a good start if you pass on the messy writing.

The Tail Of Twins

Salik_512

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Salik_512作者Salik_512

thanks for telling me your point of view. I am glad about that. Thanks. U can read my other story I SAW A SHOOTING STAR. I hope U will definitely like it. So please cheek it out.

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