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yinumlia
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Feels dreamy and entertaining. Each characters were described clearly and decently, the narration is also easy the comprehend. The plot is simple yet unique in its own way. I honestly thought it was like an isekai/transmigration story so I was quite surprised to discover it wasn't. Either way is good though, but I think this story is indeed impressive. I suggest you give more depth to the descriptions and remarks to make it more fun to read. Also, you could add more details to the scenes to help the readers imagine the amazing world you have built through writing. Keep it up!

My Second Life as a princess

Oya_Dawish

1の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね
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返事はありません。最初になろう!