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Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_ArcadianLv33yr
2021-08-16 12:08

It was an interesting story. I like the plotline, and the writing style was easy to read and understand. However, I hope the chapters could be longer, and the author could also add more details to the description. Minor problems were the misuse of punctuation marks, a few typos, and capitalization of the starting words. So far, I think this story has potential and could grow more. I wish good luck to the author!

Solitude's Requiem

Jelle4Novels
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I also share your opinion that my chapters are way too short. That's something I slowly am trying to change as I start feeling more comfortable on how to write. Descriptions idem. I will probably go back and re-edit once I come to a point where the story could take a break (probably after first volume).

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Web_Novel_977
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This is really amazing. The character design was really good and the world background is very much catchy. I'm going to add this book to the library. Waiting for some more chapters.

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Blackpaint
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A very interesting story. The MC has been through a lot and the character development seems to be progressing well. There's some paragraphs that needed minor polishing but it will be easily spotted once the author entered the editing stage. Another conern of mine is how the chapters are shorter than I expected, but overall it's a good story!

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Shameless self promotion. First time writer, non native English speaker. "Without promotion something terrible happens... Nothing! " PT Barnum

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Reveal spoiler

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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