I'm enjoying the story so far. In particular the end of chapter 1 has me wondering if his book idea is going to come back into okay later. The English could use some improvement. It's understandable, I knew what was happening, but some of the phrasing and word choice seemed awkward. I wouldn't let that stop you from giving it a read though!
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