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Loved the novel and idea behind it but, I did not like the chapter with the x men breaking into the guys house when he has runes everywhere to the point where it seemed they got lucky when none of them even have magic nor can they sense them inside. In my opinion its just to push the plot further which is okay, but the author could have done it in a different way for example letting the supreme mage find them after he brings her back or something that makes more sense.

The Game Creator in Marvel(News)

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You forget, Jean with just even a hint of the phoenix's power can mow down the runes like a candle by a strong wind, and with the combined effort of both Jean and the Professor, they easily broke through