Review Detail of Novel_Guru in Time-Space Quirk in MHA
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======== Well MC is Too OP for world background Pace is Too Fast for a reader too adapt. ( i mean i literally though what else will mc develop when he has such powers at age 13 on ch 6). No drama or flashback or background story its too straight story focused on mc power development. No foreshadowing and you wrote his whole stats many times..(it would be good if there was extra ch for mc stats or remind stats in about 20 chps it destroys readers flow.). No further potential in story development can be seen if you make mc too op ( 1 man army type ) he can literally get anything he wants with power and little bit manipulation and from then onwards story seems forced development. ==========
Time-Space Quirk in MHA
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i thought the author is giving updates, turns out to be some nonsensical creature, yeah sure saying it has no potential just like your future sore loser. offf did I hit it right? don't be sad little ant, there's still another life, oh no no no i dont i mean anything with that, dont get me wrong, oh what am I saying right it's too kuch nonsense like you, so get a life, NEET