Hmm, Only Two Chapters As Of Now. Story Development- Only 2 Chapters but I can see the author details the series of events a lot which is good. Writing Quality- Writing quality is very good I never found a mistake maybe I missed them but I didn't find any while reading. Character Design- The author has made Two originals one obviously being the protagonist and the other his sister. They both feel very real and actual humans instead of bland characters. Character Interactions are humane as well They don't feel fake. Updating Stability- Seems like Once a day or two which is good. World Background- I'll give this a five since it's a fanfic.
Makimamommy
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!