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Kuroyasha404
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Its just the first chapter so I can't say much but I really like the funny/lewd protagonist. The humour is also just right and doesn't feel forced. If have something to say it would be the paragraph size. Try to break down the paragraphs into smaller sizes so it is easier to read.

Reincarnated: Bound as a summoner's pet

SilverNexusPendrag

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Done and done. Thank you for the advice and I hope to see you again soon as the story grows.