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Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv42yrBunny_Junnie

It's going to be a good story. Just author have to put her hard work in it and it can be a masterpiece! I will suggest you to update your synopsis as there was no story. And you should write *I* with capital letters and make your chapters big. You should at least write 14 or 15k words per chapters. Anyways, maybe I wrote very much but I hope this will helpful to you and make a great story! Keep updating! I cheer you!

Tears again

jotta_agnus

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jotta_agnus
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Thank you dear

Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv4Bunny_Junnie

Most welcome 😉😉

jotta_agnus:Thank you dear