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The starting looks interesting and promising. But Xing being able to talk like a mature man from the birth even though he doesn't have any memory, It kinda feels weird to me. Nonetheless the story has potential. There are some grammatical and spelling mistakes. I hope writer will fix them and keep it in mind.

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The Starry Death Swordsman

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