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Dear author your story is very inviting however, I think it wud be better if you have an aditor. The grammar and tense are confusing the entire ordeal.

Missed Marriage : Loving Losing

Linayanti

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Thank you, I hope it will be better in the future, I really need your suggestions and input.

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