Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Kingdom of Ruins

A solid story with a fantastic start. The characters seem interesting and the plot is unique. I know the author likes to use the video game style combat descriptions which is something that I don't see negatively nor positively. I would like a bit more description of how the characters look and on the environment. The writing avoids grammar mistakes, but I think more could be added to this story. Cheers! Keep going writer.