Review Detail of SEP1A in Kingdom of Ruins

For a first time writing a novel, the author has done a fantastic job! I would love to see more characterisation of Roran and other characters: How does he walk? What is he thinking beyond just killing the beasts? How tall is he? Just paint the image and traits of your characters for your readers. Either way, I have extremely enjoyed reading this novel so far and am on the edge of my seat to see how this author matures as they continue to write. I advise the author join the webnovel writers discord and browse around to see how they can elevate their skill. Keep rising!