Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in It's Their Story

The writing is great, the updates are consistent, the story is amazing, the characters are cool, and the background is decent. I think the story could use a bit more description in terms of what the characters and environment looks like. You can add sounds and smells as another way to improve the description. Almost five stars for me though. I'll keep an eye out for this tale in the future. You are welcome to read my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".