Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read. Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to it Character design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost. Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapter World background: can't tell so far
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