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The story conveys a very important msg. However talking bout plot it was appearing realistic. Means author had done a great job. I would like to point out a few grammatical errors were there but it can be improved with time. Kiddos to the author. And please continue your novel.

the unfair life

Kevoh_Mungai

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i will check on the errors and am also planning to start season 2