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This story has a lot of potential and with a little editing here and there for the grammar it could have been better. Unfortunately the author advanced his plot way too quickly and with the MC being only 5 years old became where too illogical to read. Many times I've read a certain chapter, and in it the is MC making certain actions with the surrounding people reacting to it, and it's all good and fine, even enjoyable, until I remember the MC is only 5 years old and then I start questioning the ridiculousness in this fanfic even though it is a Naruto fanfiction... So for those who can ignore the logical twist of a 5 year old opening businesses everywhere and leading strategically his clan with everyone simply accepting it, than this fanfic is for you. And if you are like me where this simply give you an headache then this is definitely not for you.
In Naruto With Gamer System
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As I said, those who can come to terms with him being 5 years old and doing all that would definitely enjoy this fanfic.👍
WolfefloW_Too:I largely agree with this, except that the author has shown that pretty much every person around the MC has serious doubts , but are holding their tongues because MC does so much for them, is trustworthy and told them he had to keep it secret for the time being. All that to say: his age didn’t bother me as much as I thought it would
I largely agree with this, except that the author has shown that pretty much every person around the MC has serious doubts , but are holding their tongues because MC does so much for them, is trustworthy and told them he had to keep it secret for the time being. All that to say: his age didn’t bother me as much as I thought it would