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The story is great and just only a few grammatical flaws along the way but it can practice. Also some usage of words and terms such as for example, the word "drug", instead of using that, you can used the term "medicine" so it would not look negatively. I know these two words are the same but the usage of these terms are different if you applied it into sentence 😊 Overall, I love it and keep up the work, author! 😊

Will of chaos

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返事はありたせん。最初になろう!