The idea is different I guess. But after that theirs nothing good about it. By far some of the worst grammar I've ever seen. I tried to read it but I couldn't after the 3rd chp.
Sutadasuto
13の人に「いいね!」しました
いいねAntlike:I can’t believe the author is from the US. I knew the educational system there was not the best but it truly is tragic.