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Review Detail of KeiJu in Ancient Doomsday In MHA (HIATUS)

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KeiJu
KeiJu作者2yrKeiJu

I just wanted to personally give myself a rating now that really reflects my opinion, this won't go to in depth but I'll try to cover the review points. Writing Quality: I personally think that I've done pretty well so far grammatically. I haven't seen any major mistakes being pointed out so far and I started dividing the paragraphs so that it's better to read. So yeah I'd give myself a 5/5 there. Stability of Updates: I try to upload once every week and I think the last update is the first time I messed that up and that was due to medical reasons, so I'd say 5/5 is fitting there aswell. Story Development: This is very opinionated but I'd say that a 4/5 fits it. I think that I haven't created any plot holes so far and the timeline is progressing pretty well in my opinion. Character Design: I honestly feel pretty good about the mc's character developement, and I do try to show any changes in his personality or life in general. World Background: This is honestly a 3/5 max... I haven't really done with the world's backround, kinda just expecting that everyone knows mha but I'll try to show some societal aspects from now on. Like the discrimination and such. Anyways yeah that's it. I think 4.4 fits it ok, while I did wish for it to be better... I'll do another review after the 20th chapter or so where I'll hopefully get World Backround to a 4/5 at least. Thanks for reading :)

Ancient Doomsday In MHA (HIATUS)

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