Review Detail of Kydul1137 in Why Can't I Be The Hero?!?!

For one, the MC can use time magic, so, instantly busted. I do have a question, it switches from first person to third, so is the reasoning for this that Mika is like the player watching his own actions so In his thoughts it is in first person while actions are in third? I mean, it would make sense. But thus far, I like the story and it is very promising. Give it a read!