Review Detail of aiden_rivera in Minecraft Across the Multiverse (Updated)

your thing is amazing hears 5 stars also use more detail, and longer chapters cause it goes by really quick as well as the mc make him think about what happened or how and how he gonna survive or make him think I don't really know about writing I feel like it's a apropiet response and hears a idea abuse the hell out the system just a idea though other than the suggestions I put you need to add the details and make it longer that's it sorry if I sound like a dick