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IllustrisLv12yrIllustris

The story has been building up slowly and gradually but it's a good pace. I like the characters and their approach to life it felt relatable for me. The only downside I found was grammar errors which on a second editing could easily be eradicated.

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PhnxGold

1の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

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PhnxGold
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Thanks, I really appreciate it. I'll work on the grammar errors.